Type of writing: times new roman
Size: 12
Spaces 1.5
References: Harvard style
Title: Integration of sustainable life cycle management methods in project management into Oil and Gas industry.
Aim: Investigate where the implementation of SLCM methods in PM will have an impact on oil and gas industry.
Objectives:
2.Analyse the effectiveness of SLCM in project management.
3.Identfy the drivers and barriers that SLCM is experiencing.
Note : The case will be Saudi Aramco Company
Drafts Dates: 6th November literature review and Questionnaire
11th November methodology (including describe both quantitative and qualitative research and and the differences between them and which one is better for my thesis).
20th November result & discussion
28th November introduction & conclusion & recommendations
8th December finishing all chapters including abstract & acknowledgment & table of contents & list of figures, tables & references & appendices & glossary.
And about the literature review I have done 6400 words and I wanted to be paraphrased even the tables also to add more 600 words about Oil and gas all around the literature review. Below is the feedback about the literature review that I have done so the writer can see it and do modify it. And 200 words summary at the end of the literature review.
Feedback on Literature Review.
Size: 12
Spaces 1.5
References: Harvard style
Title: Integration of sustainable life cycle management methods in project management into Oil and Gas industry.
Aim: Investigate where the implementation of SLCM methods in PM will have an impact on oil and gas industry.
Objectives:
- Investigate the problem statement related to the SLCM in project management.
2.Analyse the effectiveness of SLCM in project management.
3.Identfy the drivers and barriers that SLCM is experiencing.
- Evaluate the level of SLCM methods implemented in project management within Oil and Gas industry.
Note : The case will be Saudi Aramco Company
Drafts Dates: 6th November literature review and Questionnaire
11th November methodology (including describe both quantitative and qualitative research and and the differences between them and which one is better for my thesis).
20th November result & discussion
28th November introduction & conclusion & recommendations
8th December finishing all chapters including abstract & acknowledgment & table of contents & list of figures, tables & references & appendices & glossary.
And about the literature review I have done 6400 words and I wanted to be paraphrased even the tables also to add more 600 words about Oil and gas all around the literature review. Below is the feedback about the literature review that I have done so the writer can see it and do modify it. And 200 words summary at the end of the literature review.
Feedback on Literature Review.
- Don’t use numbers for your citations / references, these sources should be included in the main text.
- Don’t write in the first person ie.. I, we etc…
- Use a numbering system for all headings and sub-headings rather than bullet points.
- All figures, charts and graphs need to be fully referenced.
- Page numbers required in citations when using direct quotes.
- There are some key points raised and sources cited but in some places the work is quite descriptive. You need to offer a more critical appraisal of what the literature is saying, not just describe it.
- Interesting comment you make about stakeholders having too much power… what do you mean by this ? Who are the stakeholders and what power do they have. Are you suggesting that it is only pressure from stakeholders that ‘force’ companies to be sustainable ?
- Be careful with saying “the benefits of sustainability” you have to remain objective throughout. Perhaps use language such as the ‘perceived benefits, as suggested by….’. You will establish the benefits or otherwise from your research.
- Overall a good effort, to summarise :
- Be more critical of the literature
- Make sure you deal with the issues in the literature you want to research so you can tie your work together with that of others.
- In your summary, identify the key points relating to the topic that you are going to take into your research.
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